Lastly (almost but have to be so), the writer cheated very so often just by pointing out something but not even giving any good explanation or detail.

The writer wasted so many chapters on gibberish whereas it could've been used to expanding out contents of the story to make it more attractive. That was like after the 1st 1/2 of the story. I cannot believe a chapter can get so many paragraphs of the same thing in various modifications (such as **** 3 years***** or 3 years ****** or ******* 3 yrs etc.). it was a good idea at first but the writer still failed by reverting to the 17k. Interesting enough, even Star Trek: The Next Generation was included (Assimilate!). Even greek mythology was pulled into this story. Some content came from mmorpg such as WOW, Diablo, and others. This can be like a mini version of Games of Thrones. The writer introduces various plots, conspiracies, and such but never follow through. Even a kindergartner can do better math than the writer. This novel have too many flaws, discrepancy, inconsistency, and disappointments. THANK GOODNESS!!! Another thing, the title is like so irrelevant. Of course the only good point here is that there are no GRANDPA's in this story. Efforts were put in where you can feel the morality of the MC fighting in his mind.

The writer started pretty good where it looks like real literature compared to other chinese novels of tr*sh this tr*sh that and being bully. It started out with a fantasy theme then later added with sci-fi then rubbish. Regretfully, this would've been a good novel to read.

Sin city novel